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 A poem. give the hyper nympho a chance will you

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Daddy's little slut
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PostSubject: A poem. give the hyper nympho a chance will you   Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:50 pm
Struggling with life unreal
Wounds that do not want to heal.

My life seems like a downward spiral
everybody watched it like a video, viral.

They laugh and point and shout at me,
I'm both a slut and a nerd you see.

I fit in with noone, and they love ti that way,
But someday theyll see, I'll make them pay!

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PostSubject: Re: A poem. give the hyper nympho a chance will you   Sat Jan 03, 2009 11:25 pm
Well, I think the verse could be tighter, but I'm always a fan of nerd vendettas!

I like it. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: A poem. give the hyper nympho a chance will you   Sun Jan 04, 2009 12:02 am
Rhyme scheme is simple, but better then most of the 'free verse' vomit I see online.
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